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MCQ Sentences Improvement
  1. “If in case” you want to resign within one month, you will have to pay Rs 10,000.
    A. If the case
    B. If the case of
    C. If at all in case
    D. In case
    E. No correction required

The correct answer is option D
The idiom ‘in case’ means ‘if it happens’ and putting another ‘if’ before the idiom doesn’t make sense.
The underlined part ‘If in case’ hence must be replaced with ‘In case’ to make it a grammatically correct sentence.

  1. He was visibly upset when he heard the sad news “of his debacle” in the election.
    A. of his debacle of
    B. of his being debacled in
    C. with his debacle in
    D. stating he debacled for
    E. no correction required

The correct answer is option E. The sentence is absolutely correct and hence no correction is required.
  1. “Had he been presented” there, he would have put an end to the happenings.
    A. If he has been presented
    B. If he had been present
    C. Had he presented
    D. If he had present
    E. No correction required

The correct answer is option B
In this sentence, which is a type 3 conditional sentence, adding ‘ed’ to the adjective ‘present’ is erroneous.
This sentence can be written in two ways:
“Had he been present there, he would have put an end to the happenings.” or “If he had been present there, he would have put an end the happenings.”
  1. Your defence that you found the purse lying on the floor “cannot be trust”.
    A. cannot be trusted
    B. can hardly be trust
    C. can never be trust
    D. could not be trust
    E. No correction required

The correct answer is option A
The sentence is in passive voice and hence past particple (third form) of the verb ‘trust’ that is ‘trusted’ will be used to make it a grammatically correct sentence.
  1. “Expeditiously completion” of the process will be appreciated by everyone involved.
    A. Expeditiously complete
    B. Expeditious complete
    C. Expeditious completion
    D. Expedite completion
    E. No correction required

The correct answer is option C
As completion is a noun, the word before it has to be an adjective adding information to it. The advrb ‘Expeditiously’ hence must be replaced with the adjective ‘Expeditious’ to make it a grammatically correct sentence.
  1. Each of our students pay their tuition fee at the beginning of the month.
    A. Student pay their
    B. Students pays their
    C. Students pays his
    D. No improvement

The correct answer is option C
• ‘students pay their’ is grammatically incorrect.
• Here, ‘each’ is singular so ‘their’ is wrong because it refers to a plural subject.
• Among the options, only option 3 has ‘his’ which is singular.
• ‘Students’ is plural. According to the subject-verb agreement, ‘pays’ must be correct.
  1. “None of the girl deserve” to be selected for this award.
    A. None of the girl deserves
    B. no improvement required
    C. None of the girls are deserving
    D. None of the girls deserves

The correct answer is option D
• The error lies in Part (None of the girl deserve) of the sentence.
• The structure of the given sentence is incorrect.
• In the underlined part ‘None’ is an indefinite pronoun and used to indicate not a single person or object among more than two persons or objects.
• So we have to change the word ‘girl’ from singular to plural ‘girls.’
As the pronoun ‘None’ is a third-person singular number we have to add ‘s’ after the verb i.e., ‘deserves.’
• Therefore, the use of ‘None of the girl deserve’ in the sentence should be replaced with ‘None of the girls deserves’ to make it grammatically correct.
  1. Rani “will carry” the bundle of clothes in a bucket to dry them out in the sun every day.
    A. carries
    B. No substitution required
    C. carry
    D. have carried

The correct answer is Option A
• At the end of the above-given sentence, we are having ‘every day’ which signifies habits or repeated actions.
• The simple present tense is used for signifying habits or repeated actions.
• The structure for simple present tense: Subject + Base form of te verb(V1) -s/es.
Example: Rajesh drinks milk every day.
• Therefore, we will apply this structure here for getting the perfect grammatical sentence.
Correct Sentence : Rani carries the bundle of clothes in a bucket to dry them out in the sun every day.
  1. I had liked her since the first time “I had seen” her.
    a) did see
    b) have seen
    c) saw
    d) No improvement

The correct answer is Option C
I started liking since I saw him. The process of seeing got completed in past. Therefore, V 2 of the verb ‘see’ should be used in place of ‘had seen’.
  1. Being injured, one of the migratory birds “have not flown” south.
    a) have not flown
    b) have not flew
    c) does not flew
    d) has not flown
    e) No correction required

The correct answer is Option D
‘One of the migratory birds’ means ‘one bird out of many birds’.
Hence, for one bird singular verb must be used. The singular of ‘have’ is ‘has’.